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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir Or Madam,
    I am writing in purpose of applying for the position of high level literary editor which you wanted.I got your recruitment information in local newspaper last weekend.
    I graduated from Zhejiang University with a degree in Chinese Language and Literature.4 years relevent work experiences I have in different publishing houses and Magazine agencies after graduation,and now I am a freelance.I really like this job,I mean literary editor,and believe I can do it very well depending on my knowledge,experiences and serious work attitude. The most I like after work is reading,I think it is a great help for an editor.
    Thanks for reading my application.I will appreciate if you can spend little time on replying.
                                                                    　Sincerely yours
                                                                            Li Ming
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Sir Or（or） Madam,    I am writing in purpose of applying for the position of high level literary editor which you wanted. I got your recruitment information in local newspaper last weekend.    I graduated from Zhejiang University with a degree in Chinese Language and Literature.4 years relevent work experiences（这一部分是跟哪一句话一起的？） I have（加动词been） in different publishing houses and Magazine agencies after graduation, and now I am a freelance. I really like this job, I mean literary editor, and believe I can do it very well depending on my knowledge, experiences and serious work attitude. The most I like after work is reading, I think it is a great help for an editor.    Thanks for reading my application. I will appreciate if you can spend little time on replying.                                                                    　Sincerely yours（加逗号）                                                                            Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：6分I have（加动词been） in different publishing houses and Magazine agencies after graduation, and now I am a freelance.这句话会让人感觉你很爱换工作。第二段写你的学历，从学校学到很多有用的知识；毕业后一直从事这方面的工作，从中得到很多经验；工作认真、喜欢读书。要有条理。