考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(66)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am glad to find the news that your company is seeking an employee as a secretary from news paper recently. It is a good opportunity to me.
    I am sure that I can do it well. First of all, I study this profession and a long system education. Second, I have a four-year work experience ,I also practice on holiday. Last but not least is that I have a high interest in this job and confidence to do it well.
    I would appreciate it if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. I am looking forward to your reply.
     Sincerely yours,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
I am glad to find the news that your company is seeking an employee as a secretary from news paper recently. It is a good opportunity to me.
I am sure that I can do it well. First of all, I study this profession and a long system education（这里是什么意思？）. Second, I have a four-year work experience , I also practice on holiday. Last but not least is that I have a high interest in this job and confidence to do it well.
I would appreciate it if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：5-6分语言的表达能力需要加强。第二段可以再充实一些。