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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a senior from the Chinese Language and Literature. I am writing the letter to apply for Chinese teacher. My friend told me your school needs Chinese teacher, so I come on.
    I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, I worked in a Chinese School, so I have experience. I enjoy working with children. I understand children’s psychological activities. I am skilled in Chinese knowledge. My cheerful personality is well suited to working as a teacher.
     Finally, I hope you can give me an interview so that I could further tell my situation.
    Yoursincerely
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a senior from the Chinese Language and Literature（把这句话说完整，是出于这个系还是这所学校）. I am writing the letter to apply for（加不定冠词a） Chinese teacher. My friend told me your school needs（从句时态服从主句，用过去时） Chinese teacher, so I come on.I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, I worked in a Chinese School, so I have experience. I enjoy working with children. I understand children’s psychological activities. I am skilled in Chinese knowledge. My cheerful personality is well suited to working as a teacher. Finally, I hope you can give me an interview so that I could further tell my situation.Your（Yours）sincerely（加逗号）Ling Ming点评：5-6分第一段错误比较多，另外需要表达明确、语言简洁。第二段没有分清层次。建议简要说一下你的学历和经验，以及对这份工作的热爱等信息，最后再说附上简历。