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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir and Madam,
    I am very glad to write this letter to you for my next job.I appreciate the opportunity of woking here with you and other colleagues.I believe the experiences will be very unforgetable throughout my life.
    I would like to express the reasons for my intention including the following ones.On the one hand, as a young man whose interest should fall with his past strength and training .Again,I have brachor’s degree of Guangzhou Medical University,I therefore assue my interest and my subject fit the job which you supply with. On the other hand, the spirit of your company,“Nothing is impossible.Just do it!”,is my faviorite sentence of my life.I guess that not only a company but also a person should make effects constantly and never stop making progress.Do you think so ?
    On the whole,I really wish to be employed by you as an employer in your company.Thank you for your time and your consideration.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Your Truly,
    Li Ming.
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir and（or） Madam,I am very glad to write this letter to you for my next job. I appreciate the opportunity of woking（拼写错误） here with you and other colleagues. I believe the experiences will be very unforgetable（拼写错误）throughout my life.I would like to express the reasons for my intention including the following ones. On the one hand, as a young man whose interest should fall with his past strength and training .Again, I have brachor’s（拼写错误） degree of Guangzhou Medical University, I therefore assue（拼写错误） my interest and my subjectfit the job which you supply with. On the other hand, the spirit of your company,“Nothing is impossible. Just do it!”,is my faviorite（拼写错误） sentence of my life. I guess that not only a company but also a person should make effects constantly and never stop making progress. Do you think so ?（不要使用这种语气）On the whole, I really wish to be employed by you as an employer in your company.（下一步是进行面试） Thank you for your time and your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your Truly,
Li Ming.(这里没有句号，落款在右下角)点评：4-5分第一段写你在哪看到了什么职位的广告要进行应聘。第二段条理清楚语言简练的写出你对于这个职位的优点。感觉你对这种文体不是很熟悉，看一下范文或是其他写的好的同学的文章。