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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writting to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a tour guide.With the letter on my resume.
     Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job,but my personality is well suited to working as a tour guide.Firstly,I am a very friendly person.Sencondly, I am quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.Thirdly,my professional is tour guide,I believe I can do it best.
     If you need to know more about me,please contact me at 87654321.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
      Sincerely,
      Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing（拼写错误） to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a tour guide. With the letter on（改成is，否则句子没有谓语动词）my resume. Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a tour guide. Firstly, I am a very friendly person. Sencondly（拼写错误）, I am（改成can，动词是后面的establish）quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. Thirdly, my professional is tour guide,（加连词） I believe I can do it best. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 87654321.I look forward to meeting you in the near future.  Sincerely,  Li Ming（落款部分全部位于右下角。一般用Yours sincerely，）点评：6分要注意细节。