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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the Graduate Admission Test of People's University of China.I am going to take this test next year,but few information can be find on the website.
     Firstly,how many postgraduates of Finance you going to recruit this year? Secondly, how many subjects will be tested? Would you please give me some guide in references material of those subjects? Thirdly, where could I get the scores line over the years?
     I would also like to inquire should I get contact with the tutor in advance? If I should,could you give some tutor's email or telephone number ?
     I am looking forward to hearing from you.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the Graduate Admission Test of People's University of China. I am going to take this test next year, but few（用little，后面的information用作不可数名词形式） information can be find（用过去分词形式） on the website. Firstly, how many postgraduates of Finance you （加are）going to recruit this year? Secondly, how many subjects will be tested? Would you please give me some guide in references material（建议用复数）of those subjects? Thirdly, where could I get the scores line over the years?  I would also like to inquire should I get contact with the tutor in advance? If I should, could you give some tutor's email or telephone number?  I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的不错。结尾再加一句客套话。另外注意细节。