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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
After seeing the advertised position of your school from the Internet, I am very excited. To be a teacher is alway my dream, and your school is my preference.
    I love to be a teacher and I am confident about myself in this field. There are three reasons. First of all, when I was in college, my major is Education. It is easier for me to teach since I have learnt the theory and practical skills for four years. Second, I am patient and easy-going. I also love to share my ideas with others. Third, teaching for me is not only a job but a career on which I would love to devote all my energy. Teaching makes my life meaningful.
    Please write back at your earliest convenience. Thanks for your time!
    Sincerely
    Li Ming
    （nao老师辛苦了！谢谢您！）
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中逗号）I love to be a teacher and I am confident about myself in this field. There are three reasons. First of all, when I was in college, my major is Education. It is easier for me to teach since I have learnt the theory and practical skills for four years. Second, I am patient and easy-going. I also love to share my ideas with others. Third, teaching for me is not only a job but a career on which I would love to devote all my energy. Teaching makes my life meaningful.Please write back at your earliest convenience. Thanks for your time!（不要用感叹号）Sincerely（加逗号，一般用Yours sincerely，）Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的很不错。结尾处还可以再提高一点。
After seeing the advertised position of your school from the Internet, I am very excited. To be a teacher is alway（拼写错误）my dream, and your school is my preference.