考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(45)

考研网

考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
     I am writing to apply for the position of accounting due to the information you published on the newspaper. As a young man whose primary interest is in accounting, I am eager to work in a company as an accountant.
     First , I have a outstanding skills in accounting .As a undergraduate student of Xiamen University ,I have passed five courses of ACCA,which shows my professional ability.Besides,I have woked in a company as an assistant of an accountant, so I am very familiar with the job . I think ,this job is fall in with my previous preparation. The record of my formal schooling and rewards are sent as a cover letter .
     I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） I am writing to apply for the position of accounting due to the information you published on the newspaper. As a young man whose primary interest is in accounting, I am eager to work in a company as an accountant. First , I have a outstanding skills in accounting .As a undergraduate student of Xiamen University ,I have passed five courses of ACCA, which shows my professional ability. Besides, I have woked（拼写错误） in a company as an assistant of an accountant（可以直接说accounting assistant）, so I am very familiar with the job . I think ,this job is fall in with my previous preparation. The record of my formal schooling and rewards are sent as a cover letter . I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration.【 Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming 】（这一部分都要位于右下角）点评：8分写的不错，注意一下格式，不要在格式上丢分。