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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a senior from Hunan Normal University. I am writing to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member.
     I am sure that I am a perfect candidate for this job. To begin with, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. In addition, I have accumulated abundant professional knowledge in the university. Last but not least, enclosed with my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experiences.
     I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Look forward to you replay.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior from Hunan Normal University. I am writing to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member.
I am sure that I am a perfect（要谦虚） candidate for this job. To begin with, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. In addition, I have accumulated abundant professional knowledge in the university. Last but not least, enclosed with my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experiences. I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Look forward to you（用所有格your） replay. Yours sincerely, Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分错误比较少。第一段应该交代你申请的是什么职业，以便第二段更有针对性的列出你的优势。第二段比较空洞，不够充实。