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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member.
     I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, I once worked as a librarian in my college library. I have absoluted much work experience from it. Second, not only do my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my kindful and friendly personality is well suited for the job. Third, my hobby is singing.
     Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a college student who wishes to apply for your recently advertised position for a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, I once worked as a librarian in my college library. I have absoluted（拼写错误） much work experience from it. Second, not only do（这里应该用does） my experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my kindful（拼写错误） and friendly personality is well suited for the job. Third, my hobby is singing.（与申请工作没有关系） Finally, I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to grant me an interview as soon as possible. At that time I could introduce myself in further details. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Ming点评：5-6分第一段写明你要申请的职位。然后分几条说明自己。要写对你申请工作最有帮助的几条内容。