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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
    Iam a senior from medical school.I am writing this letter to interview a positionfor paediatrician in your hospital.
     I am sure that I am qualified for it.First,I have the experience about the paediatrician.Second,I own the responsibility and kindnesswhat the doctor should have.Last,enclosed with this letter is my resume,which include my qualification and work experience.
     I appreciate it if you could give me a chance for face to face.Thank you for your reading.
     Yours Sincerely
    Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Iam a senior from medical school.I am writing this letter to interview（建议改成apply） a positionfor paediatrician（拼写错误） in your hospital. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, I have the experience about the paediatrician（拼写错误）. Second, I own the responsibility and kindnesswhat the doctor should have. Last, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which include（应该用第三人称单数形式） my qualification and work experience. I appreciate it if you could give me a chance for face to face（建议用interview）. Thank you for your reading. Yours Sincerely（加逗号）Li Ming点评：6分第二段写的有点笼统，可以再加两句话。可以背一下模板，看怎样写比较好。