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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm writing to express my interested in your recently advertised position for a staff member. I majored in International Trade and Economics. My complete resume is attatched.
     I'm sure that I am qualified for it. First,I have rich parctice experience. I have take charge in the study department of the Student's Union,organized many large activities,such as lecture game,debate competion,study discussion and so on.Second,not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job,but my personality is well suited to working as a staff member.I'm a friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with others.
     May I have a personal interview at your convenience?I can be reached by telephone.
     Your sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to express my interested（这里应该用名词interest） in your recently advertised position for a staff member. I majored in International Trade and Economics. My complete resume is attatched（拼写错误）. I'm sure that I am qualified for it. First, I have rich parctice（拼写错误） experience. I have take（take的过去分词是taken） charge in the study department of the Student's Union, organized many large activities, such as lecture game（应该用复数）, debate competion（拼写错误）, study discussion and so on. Second, not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a staff member. I'm a friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with others. May I have a personal interview at your convenience? I can be reached by telephone. Your（Yours） sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分中间一段要简明，可以去掉不必要的语言用来写你的学历情况。最后一段写的不是很好，最好不要用问句，可以看一下其他同学的结尾。