考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(32)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir or madom,
    I am a senior studentfromthe Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writting the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised post for a staff member.
     I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. Secendly, I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success.Thirdly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience .
     Finally, I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background ,hobbies andworking experiences
     Yours sincerely
     LI Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear sir or madom（madam拼写错误，用大写Sir or Madam）, I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writting（拼写错误 the letter in purpose of applying for your recently advertised post for a staff member. I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a staff member. Secendly（拼写错误）, I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Thirdly, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Finally, I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background, hobbies and working experiences Yours sincerely（加逗号） LI Ming点评：6分建议在第一段写明你申请的职位，从而让第二段的几条信息更有针对性。结尾处还应该有“等待您的回复”之类的一句话。So that后的可以去掉。