考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(22)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     Having noticed the advertisement in today's BTV Channel 1,My interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.
     I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position.For one thing,I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University.in the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times.For another,I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit in Shanghai Book Company.
     Thank you for your attention to my resume,I look forward to an interview to discuss further.
    Sincerely yours,
     Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel that I have the qualifications necessary to effectively handle the responsibilities of the position. For one thing, I am presently a senior in good standing at Shanghai University. in（i大写） the past three years, I have achieved satisfactory scores in my studies and been awarded scholarships several times. For another, I have more than two years of experience working as a part-time edit（edit是个动词，这里需要名词editor） in Shanghai Book Company. Thank you for your attention to my resume, I look forward to an interview to discuss further. Sincerely yours,  Li Ming（应该位于右下方）点评：7-8分写的很不错，语言简练，注意格式，加油！ Having noticed the advertisement in today's BTV Channel 1, My（m小写）interest in the position of news editor has prompted me to forward my resume for your review and consideration.