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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir,
    I am writing for the position that your company advertising on TIME newspaper.I believe I will be fit for it because of my experience an knowledge.
I have had worked for a famous IT company as a manager.I solved many problems there.With time is going ,I accumulate amount of experience.I am sure I am comptent for the position for manager you are employing.As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand behavior of employers.Therefore I can manage them better.You will be never regret if employed me.
I look forward to your repaly.
Sincerely yours,
Li ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir（因为不知道是男士还是女士，改成Sir or Madam）,I am writing for the position that your company advertising（这里应该用动词的过去时advertised） on TIME newspaper. I believe I will be fit（这里需要用一个形容词） for it because of my experience an（and？） knowledge.
I have had（去掉，后面的work是动词） worked for a famous IT company as a manager（for X years）. I solved many problems there. With time is going（going on）, I accumulate amount of（an amount of或是amounts of） experience. I am sure I am comptent（拼写错误，competent） for the position for manager you are employing（这里要表达的是什么意思？）. As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand（加定冠词the） behavior of employers. Therefore I can manage them better. You will be never regret if employed me.
I look forward to your repaly（拼写错误replay）.
Sincerely yours,
Li（这里没有空格） ming（m大写）（落款部分写在信件右下角）点评：5-6分细节性的语法错误比较多，一方面需要细心，另一方面需要加强语法知识的学习。