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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
     I have got the message from internet which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job.
     I have graduated from GZ University for two years,and I have got Yale’s P.D one month ago.All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job.I worked as an experiment assistant for two years,therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus.
     If I am possible to get this job please contact me,my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time.
     Your sincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet（i大写）which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This（t小写）letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ（不建议使用缩写）University for two years, and I have got Yale’s P.D（不建议使用缩写） one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistant for two years,（加连词and） therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your（Yours）sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6-7分写的还可以的，注意一下大小写和信件的格式。考试和简历中为了表示诚意，不建议使用缩写。