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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I’m a graduate student whose major is English.By searching the Internet,I find that there is a position of English tearching offered by your company.I thereby decide to apply for this job with due consideration about the good reputation of your firm and my good command of English.
     Firstly,this job does fall in with my previous training and preparation.Secondly,I have a outstanding skill at English teaching and I can speak Chinese and English fluently.Above all,I have relevant experience and professional spirit.
     I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to accept my application.I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
     Yours Sincerely
     Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a graduate student whose major is English. By searching the Internet, I find that there is a position of English tearching（拼写错误teaching）offered by your company. I thereby decide to apply for this job with due consideration about the good reputation of your firm and my good command of English. Firstly, this job does fall in with my previous training and preparation. Secondly, I have a（应该用an）outstanding skill at English teaching and I can speak Chinese and English fluently. Above all, I have relevant experience and professional spirit.  I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to accept my application. I will look forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours Sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，错误比较少。第一段可以再简洁一些，然后第二段适当的加一两句话。