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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a translator. I should be grateful of you would consider me favorably as a candidate for the position.
I graduated with a Master's degree in Fudan University in 2009. And then I worked as a translator for a foreign company in Shanghai for 2 years. This year, my family transfer to Beijing, so I want to find a new job in this city. The position your company provide is important to me. I'm familiar with the translating work, and I have the national certificate of translating. Last year I handled the whole task that inviting the clients from USA of my company to enjoy the Shanghai Expo.
I shall be pleased to furnish you withing further information concerning my education and work experience. I am available for an interview any moment. My telephone number is: 666-666.
Looking forward to receiving your favorable reply.
                                                      Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a translator. I should be grateful of you would consider me favorably as a candidate for the position. I graduated with a Master's degree in Fudan University in 2009. And then I worked as a translator for a foreign company in Shanghai for 2 years. This year, my family transfer（应该用过去时） to Beijing, so I want to find a new job in this city. The position your company provide is important to me. I'm familiar with the translating work, and I have the national certificate of translating. Last year I handled the whole task that inviting the clients from USA of my company to enjoy the Shanghai Expo（最好不要用简写）. I shall be pleased to furnish you withing（with？） further information concerning my education and work experience. I am available for an interview any moment. My telephone number is: 666-666. Looking forward to receiving your favorable reply.（这一句话可以并在最后一段） 【Yours sincerely, Li Ming】（落款部分写在右下角）点评：8-9分写的很不错。最后一段适当简练一些。