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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm much grateful to read the message that you are employing an accountant from the newspaper.I would like to extend my sincere appreciation if I have the chance to be interviewed by you.
     As a graduate from economic university whose primary major is accountance,I am sure that what I previou training and strengh may conform to your request.Moreover,during the university life I had ever got the schoolarship for twice.It may be an unforgetable experience if I have the honor to work with you and other colleagues.
     I am looking forward to your reply.Thank you for your time and consideration.
    Yours truely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm much grateful to read the message that you are employing an accountant from（一般用介词in） the newspaper. I would like to extend my sincere appreciation if I have the chance to be interviewed by you. As a graduate from economic university whose primary major is accountance（拼写错误）, I am sure that what I previou（拼写错误）training and strengh（这里需要的是动词，因为虽然它们做的是主语，但是是在从句中） may conform to your request. Moreover, during the university life I had ever got the schoolarship（拼写错误） for twice. It may be an unforgetable（拼写错误） experience if I have the honor to work with you and other colleagues. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours truly（拼写错误）,Li Ming点评：5-6分拼写错误有点多。第二段最后一句话去掉，可以在加一条关于experience的说明。第一段最好交代你要申请的职位。