考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(47)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am an undergraduate student form the university. I find your company is looking for an editor about a new book. Then I write this letter and apply for get this position.
     I believe I am qualified for it. To begin with, I study this profession and have a long systemic education. What is more, I went to practice in the publication among the holidays, so I have a multiple of experiences in the field of editor. Last but not least is that I have a strong interesting about my specialty, then I have confidence to play a good role in the work.
     So, I would express my appreciation if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your replay.
      Yours sincerely,
      Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am an undergraduate student form（from） the university（说明是具体哪所大学）. I find your company is looking for an editor about a new book. Then I write this letter and apply for get（介词后用动名词，也可以去掉这个词） this position. I believe I am qualified for it. To begin with, I study this profession and have a long systemic education. What is more, I went to practice in the publication among the（改成介词on） holidays, so I have a multiple of （去掉）experiences in the field of editor. Last but not least is that I have a strong interesting about（改成interest in，这里需要名词） my specialty, then I have confidence to play a good role in the work. So, I would express my appreciation if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your replay. Yours sincerely, Li Ming （落款部分位于右下角）点评：6-7分写的还可以，语法问题有点多。