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考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,Yesterday I got the message from the newspaper that you are looking for a secretary and I am writing to you for applying it.I am graduated from XXuniversity majored in Chinese and Literature and I did well in in the past four years.Besides,I have experienced in a company as a secretary for six monthes.So if Ican get the chance to serve your company,Iam sure I will be competent for the position as soon as possible.Finally,I am looking forward to your reply sincerely. Yours LingMing
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,Yesterday I got the message from the newspaper that you are looking for a secretary and I am writing to you for applying it.I am graduated from XXuniversity（u大写，XX University） majored in Chinese and Literature and I did well in in（去掉一个） the past four years. Besides, I have experienced in a company as a secretary for six monthes（months）. So if I can get the chance to serve your company, Iam（I am或是I’m） sure I will be competent for the position as soon as possible.Finally, I am looking forward to your reply sincerely.  Yours LingMing（Yours sincerely，下一行LiMing）点评：7-8分言简意赅，条理分明。要注意细节上的问题。