考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(4)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application. I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information.
     I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm.
     So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application（application letter）. I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor（首字母全部小写就可以了）in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information.  I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm.  So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming（这一部分要写在右下角）点评：7-8分写的很不错，个别的表达需要简化，加油，争取写出满分作文。