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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,   I'm writting this letter in order to applying for your recently advrtised position for interior designer .I obtain the news form newpaer.I am suer that I am qualitied it .
     I am a interior designer from Department of Envionmental Art.With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years. Second, I have acquiet many detail of struction ,Equipment, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.
     Finally, I look forward to your reply,and to attending yours company.
     Yours sincerely
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm writting（拼写错误，writing） this letter in order to applying（改成apply，in order to do） for your recently advrtised（拼写错误，advertised） position for interior designer .I obtain the news form（加冠词）newpaer（拼写错误，newspaper）. I am suer（拼写错误，sure） that I am qualitied（拼写错误，qualified to，加介词to） it .
     I am a（应该用不定冠词an，后面是以元音开头的词语） interior designer from Department of Envionmental（拼写错误，environmental） Art. With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years（可以说I have worked for 7 years或是I have a seven-year work experience，但是不能将两种说话合在一起说）. Second, I have acquiet（拼写错误，acquired？） many detail（应该用复数details） of struction（拼写错误，structure？） , Equipment（e不用大写）, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly（拼写错误，rapidly） operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.
     Finally, I look forward to your reply, and to attending yours company.
     Yours sincerely
Li Ming（这一部分写在右下角）
   
点评：4-5分
     主要的问题是拼写错误比较多，这会让自己的作文比较吃亏，好好背一下常用单词的拼写。写完作文后快速检查一遍内容。