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    安慰信
You heard that one of your friends failed in the entrance examination of postgraduate. Write a letter to him which should include the following information:
1.Express your regrets
2.Encourage him to try again
3.Hope to see him in high spirits.
You should write about 100 words.
Dear Jennifer,
称呼:写作关系亲密的个人

I am very sorry to hear that you didn’t pass your exam.
I know how difficult the past few weeks have been for you.
I have thought about this for a long time and I decide to express my regrets in this way.
第一段点明写作目的:为了安慰朋友没有通过考试。
第一句话开门见山拟安慰事宜。
(积累:I am sorry to hear that…)
第二句话表达写信人感同身受。
第三句话是一个and连接的并列复合句,强调写信人写这封信的原因。
(积累:express my regrets)

You are a very smart person as well as an industrious student. If it were not for your cold, you would have been admitted by Qinghua University.
I think you should try one more time next year. I am sure that you will be successful.
However, you should pay attention to your health. You should do some exercises after studying for a period of time.
第二段从考试失败的客观原因及建议两方面展开。
第一、二句先肯定收信人的实力,然后强调了考试失败的客观原因----感冒。
(积累: as well as; be admitted by)
第三、四句提出写信人的第一条建议:再坚持考一年
(积累:try one more time)
第五、六句提出写信人的第二条建议:注意身体健康。
(积累:do some exercises)
I hope you will be in high spirits when I see you next time.
第三段是一个复合句,表达了写信人的祝福和期待。
(积累:in high spirits)
Best wishes,
Li Ming
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