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Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions
Dear Sir,
| 称呼：写作关系不亲密的个人
| As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.
| 第一段只有一句话，包含了2层信息：自我介绍以及写信目的。
（积累：It is my obligation to do…; make some suggestions concerning…）
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Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped.
However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us:
1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter;
2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.
| 第二段是提出建议及改进措施段。
第一句肯定所述对象的优点，为后面的改进意见做铺垫。
（积累：generally speaking， situate in…; well-equipped）
第二句是一个过渡句，转折到写信的根本目的上：提建议。建议共分2条，通过序号列出。
第三句提出第一条建议：改进供暖系统。
（积累：in need of； fail to do…）
第四句提出第二条建议：家具设计不实用。
（in a practical manner）
| I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.
| 第三段只有一句话，对信件进行总结，表达了期待得到解决的真诚态度。
（I would be more than happy if…；take place ）
| Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
| 信件结尾和署名
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发表于 2017-8-5 21:50:32