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2017考研初试还有不到一个月的时间,考生们都在进行紧张的冲刺复习。作为考研英语极为重要的一部分,作文也是考生本阶段复习的重点之一。小编特为大家整理了2017考研英语作文短文写作解析及范文之家庭健康类,有需要的同学可以参考一下哦。
  身体健康类短文写作解析和范文(8)
  Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
  1) describe the drawing briefly,
  2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) suggest counter-measures.
  You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.
  范文:
  In the picture, we are amazed to find that the god of death is sitting maliciously on a bus whose driver dozed off while driving. It clearly tells us that in the domain of transportation, there are hidden dangers everywhere should we become careless.
  Traffic accidents have long been a problem since the invention of automobiles, and are becoming an increasingly severe problem because of the boom of population, as well as the mass production of all forms of automobiles. There are more reasons for this issue. Firstly, many truck drivers are forced to drive days and nights with little rest simply because their employers desire more profit. Secondly, a lot of citizens drive after drinking alcohol, reacting slowly when encountering emergency. Thirdly, quite a number of young people enjoy acceleration, but their limited driving skills frequently lead to tragedies.
  Judging from the analysis above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the daunting problem demands effective counter-measures. Most importantly, the government needs to implement sufficiently relevant laws and regulations in order to strengthen inspection. In addition, all residents should be aware of the hidden dangers in transportation and insist in keeping alert whenever driving.
  译文:
  在这幅图中,我们惊奇地看到死神正坐在一辆行驶的车上,恶毒地看着车中正在打瞌睡的司机。该图显然在告诉我们在交通领域,我们一旦不小心就会有许多潜在的危险。 交通事故自从汽车发明以来就一直是一个问题,现在由于人口的增长和各种汽车的大规模生产、这个问题变得越来越严重。此外,导致这个问题的原因还有很多。首先,很多卡车驾驶员被迫日夜不停地驾驶,因为他们的雇主想赚更多的利润。第二,许多市民在酒后驾驶,一旦发生紧急情况他们的反应会比较迟缓。第三,很多年轻人喜欢高速驾驶,但是他们的驾车技术有限,导致了很多悲剧。 从上面的分析中,我们认为必须采取有效的措施来接决这一问题。最重要的是政府应该采取充分的法律法规来加强监管力度。此外,人们要普遍地意识到交通中许多潜在危险,因此我们在驾车的时候一定要保持警惕。
  闪光词汇及词组:
  malicious: adj. 恶意的,恶毒的 doze off: v. 打瞌睡 domain: n. 领域,范围
  mass production: 大规模生产 days and nights: 日日夜夜地 encounter: v. 面对,面临
  emergency: n. 紧急情况,突然事件 alcohol: n. 酒,酒精
  acceleration: n. 快速驾车 daunting: 使人畏缩的 inspection: n. 检查,视察
  万能句型:
  In the picture, we are amazed to find that… It clearly tells us that…
  There are more reasons for this issue.
  Judging from the analysis above, we may safely come to the conclusion that…

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