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发表于 2016-11-8 09:37:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  写一篇作文有一篇作文的成就,写十篇作文就会有十篇作文的成就。所以,我们今天在拿一篇文章进行练笔。下面是2011年英语一的真题,大家首先来看一下:
  Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
  1) describe the drawing briefly,
  2) explain it’s intended meaning, and
  3) give your comments.
  Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
  本次大作文话题为大家一直比较关注的环保问题。环境问题在1991年、1999年以及2000年都曾经考过,所以对各位考生来讲并不陌生。而且2010年考查的文化与2002年考查话题一致,因此,话题复现是很自然的,这也提示了大家未来考生复习往年话题的重要性。文章采取总分总结构。第一段描述图画,描述的内容一定要与主题相关。与主题没有关系的内容尽量不要写,一方面有凑数的嫌疑,另一方面,容易造成语法错误。如第一段The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that some people in our daily life still lack the awareness of environmental protection. The picture illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.
  第二段揭示产生问题的原因,可以列举2-3个理由。原因方面可以是直接原因,也可以是间接原因;或者写此问题可能导致的结果。如Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environment management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.
  最后一段提出解决问题的方案或者措施,如From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting the environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying the environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.
  大作文描图部分是能力展现最佳的地方也是最容易出现错误的地方,大家切不可粗心大意。第二部分是阐述观点的论述段落,因为我们每个人看待事物的角度不同,那我们论述时入手的角度就会有所不同,如因果论述、意义阐述、对比论证等等。但所有的论述要有根有节,章法自然。最后一段阐述自己的观点即可。
  英语一的大作文关注点就是这几个方面,虽然我们在强调反压题,但是事实就是事实,关注点就是关注点。我们主要的备考方面还是不会变的,希望大家不要在最后乱了阵脚。
  以上是中公考研小编整理的2017考研英语作文冲刺复习指导,希望能对2017年的考生有所帮助,为了帮助考生更好地复习,中公考研为广大学子推出2017考研冲刺集训营、专业课一对一系列备考课程,针对每一个科目要点进行深入的指导分析,欢迎各位考生了解咨询。同时,中公考研一直为大家推出精品网课、考研直播课堂,足不出户就可以边听课边学习,为大家的考研梦想助力!
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