2009年考研英语大作文经典范文(7)

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八、感谢信
1. 感谢信是向对方表达谢诚的书信,语言可以比较正式,也可以比较口语化,依收信人与寄信人的关系而定.感谢信一般有表示感谢、所得好处和其他相关细节组成. 语言注意点感谢信应充分表达自己的谢意，切不可给对方草率的印象。可借助谈对方的帮助来进一步表达感激之情。言辞应真挚、得体。
2. 正文主要有3 部分:
(1) 对于收信人的惠助表示感谢；
(2) 解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处；
(3) 再次表示诚挚谢意。
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Dear ...,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for.... If it had not been for your assistance in..., I fear that I would have been...

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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Dear ...,

It is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for...

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Thank you again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return your kindness.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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4. 常用表达：
(1) I don't know how to express my gratitude for you...
(2) I cannot tell you how much I owe you...
(3) It was thoughtful/kind/generous of you...
(4) Thank you again for your generosity/hospitality/generous help/assistance...
(5) I am so lucky that...
(6) I am writing to express my appreciation for ...
(7) I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your kindness.
(8) How grateful I am for...
(9) be of great help to...
(10) be (feel) greatly enlightened by...

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Directions: Write a letter to express your appreciation for the interview, write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Wang  Fen " instead. You do not need to write the address.

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May.21,

Dear Mr. Green,

(1) I appreciated the chance to meet with you yesterday about the position of Assistant in Marketing with  Open Company.

(2) I really enjoyed meeting with members of the office and learning about the job. The entire team certainly seems to be highly skilled and motivated and the work itself seems as rewarding as it is challenging. From our discussion, I gained a strong sense of Open Company's commitment to their clients and their employees. I also enjoyed our discussion of my opportunities and future within the firm.

(3) I feel strongly that I possess the qualities required as an assistant. I believe my education and experiences have prepared me well for a future with you. I eagerly expect our next meeting. (4) Thank you for considering me for this opportunity.

Sincerely yours,

Wang  Fen

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(1) 套语 I appreciated the chance to...

表示感谢对方给的面试的机会

(2) 说明感谢的事由,具体阐述

词汇：highly skilled and motivated 技艺高超，工作积极性高

commitment 者任

gained a strong sense of ... 强烈的...感

(3) 常用表达 I feel strongly that... 强烈地觉得...

Sth. have prepared me well for.. ....已让我准备好...

(4) 套语Thank you for considering me for this opportunity.

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May.21,

Dear M套语r. Green,

(1) Thank you very much for seeing me yesterday. The interview confirmed what others

have told me that Open Company would be a terrific place for someone with many skills and interests.

(2) I am convinced that I could make an impact and add value as an Assistant in your department. As we reviewed my background, I hope that you came to a similar conclusion. It was indeed a pleasure to discuss the opportunities with you. I thank you again for the opportunity and look forward to our next interaction.

Again, you can reach me everyday at123456, or you may leave a message on my answering machine, and I will return your call promptly.

Sincerely Yours,

Wang  Fen

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(1) 套语: Thank you very much for.....非常感谢你....

词汇: confirm 证实

(2) I am convinced that.... 我确信...

词组: came to a similar conclusion 得出相同的结论

词汇: interaction  互动

留下联系方式 reach me at... 通过,,,,和我联系

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kyfour

九、投诉信
1. 对所遇到的困扰，恶劣的服务态度，劣质的产品等提出抗议和改进的建议。
内容有理，批评有节。语言注意点投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因，叙事应客观、准确、简洁。最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。在表达自己的不满时，语言要把握分寸，不失风度。
2. 正文主要有3个部分：
(1) 说明投诉的对象
(2) 阐述投诉的具体原因
(3) 表示希望投诉后能尽快得到改正
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Dear ...,

I am writing to complain about...

I trust you will take my complaints seriously and.. If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give back my money, or I would complain to the concerned authorities.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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Dear ...,

I am writing to inform you that I find...unsatisfactory.....

I hope you attach importance to this matter, and help settle it as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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(1) I write to show my great anger at your...
(2) I am writing to protest against your...
(3) I am writing to complain about...
(4) My complaint about your... is based on the fact that...
(5) Hope you will improve your...
(6) I hope you will take steps to rectify this situation soon.
(7) It is high time you took some measures to solve...
(8) I sincerely hope such things will never take place again.
(9) You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court.
(10) If you can't give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.

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Directions: Write a letter  to complain about the bad service you have received, write about 100 words. You do not need to write the address.

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Mar. 15

Dear manager,

(1) I am writing to show my great anger about the bad service I encountered in your department store last Sunday. That saleswoman (No.411) was by no means patient enough to answer my questions about the products. She was so eagerly talking with her friend that she just turned a deaf ear to my questions. I felt disappointed that such bad service could have happened in a so-called five-star department store. (2) I hope you do something to stop such things happening any more, just to save your store's fame.

Yours sincerely,

Custom

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(1) 套语 I am writing to show my great anger about...

提出投诉的原因

by no means  绝对不...

turn  a deaf ear to... 不理睬...

(2) 提出希望能得到改正

save your store's fame 换回该公司的荣誉

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Dear Sir/Madam,

(1) I am writing to you to complain about your hotel. I had a terrible stay in room 5012 of your hotel from the 24th to the 26th of August 2002, when I came to Guangzhou on business.

The air-conditioning in my room could not be turned down or switched off. When I asked the reception staff to do something about it, they laughed and told me it was better than being hot. I asked your front of house manager and she told me she would send someone to my room immediately. No-one came. As a result, I was very cold every time I was in the room.

I paid a lot for my stay in your hotel and expect much better service from such a well-known hotel. In future, I will not be staying at your hotel again and will inform my business associates of the terrible service.

Yours faithfully,

Ken

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(1) 套语 I am writing to you to complain about.... 我写这封信是为了向你投诉....

词汇: reception staff 接待员

front of house manager 前台经理

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十、道歉信
1. 由于违约，或做错了事，说错了话，或是因服务不周造成了某种不良后果，当事人必须为此道歉。
书写道歉类便条时要注意：
(1) 要言辞恳切，诚心诚意，指出自己并非故意伤害或开罪对方，切忌对自己的过失作过多辩解。
(2) 要请对方谅解自己的过失或给对方带来的不便。
(3) 需要使用 I'm sorry, I apologize等字眼明确表达自己的歉意。
2. 正文主要有4个部分:
(1) 道歉行为和内容。
(2) 道歉的具体理由。
(3) 弥补方法。
(4) 进一步致歉
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Please accept my sincere apology for...

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I am sorry again for the inconvenience I caused to you.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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Dear ...,

I am sorry to tell you that I won't be able to...

I am very sorry for the trouble.

Yours sincerely,

Name...

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4.[B] [/B][B]常用表达：[/B]
(1) I write to apologize for having caused you so much trouble.
(2) Please accept my apology for my rude behavior at the party.
(3) I am writing to express my apology for...
(4) I am sorry for causing you all this inconvenience.
(5) I really didn't mean to hurt/offend/insult you.
(6) I shall not be so rude/late/careless again.

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You are already have a date with your friend but suddenly have another thing to do and you have to tell your friend that you can't go. Express your reason clearly in about 100 words.  

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May 5, 2008

Dear Jane,

(1) I am sorry to tell you that I won't be able to come this afternoon because I have to go to the airport at 2:00 p. m. to meet an overseas visitor from Australia. (2)I really have kept our date in my mind all these days, however, I received my boss' e-mail this morning, he asked me to go to the airport to meet one of his friends from abroad, it's suddenly and urgent and I must go.(3) Please forgive me.(4) Would you please ring me up to make another time?

Yours,

Tom

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称呼语

(1) 道歉的内容。 套语：I am sorry to tell you that...

表明自己不能赴约

(2) 道歉的具体原因

收到了上司的信函, 要去机场接机

it's suddenly and urgent and I must go.

进一步解释,并表明自己的无奈

(3) 进一步道歉 Please forgive me 求得原谅

(4) 提出弥补的办法

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May 5, 2008

Dear Emma,

I am writing to express my apology that I cannot dine with you this afternoon. I'm really sorry but I have some urgent thing to do. It is my essay on history my teacher called me this morning and asked me to revise my essay in her office, so I guess I have to spend a whole day there. I hope you will forgive me and please call me as soon as possible so we can discuss the next meeting time.

Yours,

Jane

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