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Section IV Writing
Part A
47. 参考范文:
Dear classmates,
I am writing to inform you that our class is going to hold a charity sale in order to help those orphans in the welfare house near our university.
Any books, clothes and toys that are not needed any more can be donated and sold into cash. All the money will be used to buy Spring Festival presents for the kids. The charity sale will be held in the auditorium of our college from 3 p.m. to 6 p.m. on January 10th. All the classmates of our class are encouraged to take part in the activity and you could also call on your friends to participate.
Your participation is the best gift for the kids who need help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【点评】
2013年考研英语(二)应用文(小作文)仍然考察信函,要求给同学写信告知他们,为了帮助有需要的孩子,班里要举办慈善义卖活动,并号召他们积极参加。
既然是信函,那么首先要注意对信函格式的把握,注意开头称呼语和最后的落款。其次,内容应该包括必要的细节。这需要大家发挥一下想象力,思考一下要帮助什么样的孩子,以及活动的形式、时间和地点等等。
在文章布局上,建议分三部分展开。开头直接表明写信目的;第二部分描述细节,告知活动形式、时间、地点等并鼓励大家参与。第三部分再次呼吁大家参加。
Part B
48. 参考范文
As is revealed in the bar chart, the proportion of the students taking part-time jobs has changed. The proportion increases slowly from freshmen to juniors, while that of the seniors surges to 88.24%.
Taking a part-time job has both pros and cons. Firstly, college students can get a chance to put their ideas into practice. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides those students who are eager to be independent a sense of achievement. Also, students who shoulder heavy burden from their family can make some money to lessen their parents’ financial crisis. Nevertheless, issues will rise. In order to take part-time jobs, some students are frequently absent from classes and even cannot pass the final exam. Therefore, they may lose their credits as well as their diplomas.
As far as I am concerned, I’ll strike for a balance between my study and part-time jobs. If I do not have enough spare time, I choose to abandon part-time jobs without hesitation, throwing myself into my major task, that is, study.
【点评】
2013考研英语(二)的大作文仍然是图表作文,从话题的角度来看,是考生非常熟悉的关于大学生兼职的话题。而且这次的图表是简单的呈上升趋势的条形图,也比较容易。可见,无论从话题角度还是图表角度,本次大作文难度与去年相比,都略有降低。
在写作过程中,考生要注意概括出图表中反映出来的核心问题,随着年级的增长,兼职的人数也不断增长。同时,可以选取一个角度进行展开议论,比如,范文中的大学生兼职的利与弊。在阐述自我观点时,考生无须拘泥于图表,表达出自己的真实想法即可。 |
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