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2013考研英语一大作文点评（沪江网校提供）
        2013考研英语（一）的大作文仍然考察大家熟悉的图画作文，而且图画主题非常明显，是关于毕业生面临的选择和迷茫这一社会热点话题。相信广大考生对这一话题并不陌生，看到图画也会有亲切感，不会感到从无下手或无话可说。题目要求仍然是三点：描述图片内容，分析图片内涵并进行评论。进行评论时，我们可以从建议、原因、影响等方面进行展开。
        分析好图画主题和题目要求之后，我们开始对文章进行布局谋篇。对于考场作文，尤其是考研图画或图表作文，最容易掌握的是三段式写法。
        第一段简要描述图画内容，然后引出主题。可以用上一些万能句式，比如在描述图画内容是可以用What a vivid and thought-provoking picture! We see that… 在引出图画主题的时候，可以用It is clear that the picture wants to convey(that)…/It is clear that the picture wants to tell us (that)…/What lies behind the picture is (that)…
        第二段我们可以给出建议，分析一下对于毕业生来说如何才能做出正确的选择；也可以分析原因，比如为什么在面临诸多选择时，毕业生会感到迷茫；还可以分析影响，毕业生面临选择时的迷茫会对他们的人生道路产生什么影响。注意，在列举论点和论据时，要注意使用序列词，让论证条理清晰。
        第三段可以对第二段内容进行总结，用in conclusion等表示总结的词引出。当然，如果你在第二段论述原因或影响，那么第三段也可以给出建议。
        参考范文：
        What a vivid and thought-provoking picture! We see that a large group of graduates come to a fork in the road and cannot decide which one they should take. It is clear that the picture wants to convey the confusion every college student must face when they graduate: hunting for an ideal job, taking part in the annual National Entrance Examination for Postgraduates, going aboard to achieve further education or starting their own business.
        Undoubtedly, the decision one makes when he or she graduates will have an important or even a decisive influence on his or her life. The following factors, in my opinion, should be taken into consideration if one wants to choose the right way. To begin with, graduates should analyze and understand the different features of each road. For example, becoming an employee is far less desirable than starting one’s own business. However, enterprisers can get much greater satisfaction achievement than employees. Next, personality should be thought over. For instance, an introvert is more suitable for doing research and had better become a postgraduate. Family economic state should also be considered because some careers, such as starting one’s own business or going aboard, need more money than others.
        In conclusion, in order to choose the right way, one must be both realistic and self-aware. Moreover, once having made a decision, one should work hard to achieve his or her goal.