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第一部分：说明写信目的
You have asked me for some advice on how to improve…. I will try to give some useful suggestions.
I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of … so as to…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise you of…
第二部分：提出建议
I'd like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…
Could you please…
Why don't we…
In my opinion …
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
第三部分：期盼回复
Thank you for your attention.
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I hope you will find these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations(建议) helpful/ practical/ useful(有帮助的，实用的).
高分热文
Dear John,
You asked for advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university. I will try making some suggestions.
You must keep in mind(记住) that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. There is no doubt that(毫无疑问)the field of computer science offers far more job opportunities than history. We are now in a high-tech age(高科技时代). For the foreseeable future(可预知的未来), it would be necessary for everyone to be equipped with (配备)computer skills merely to earn a living.
Of course, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
精彩译文
亲爱的约翰：
你问我关于该学历史还是计算机的看法，我将尽力给你一些有用的建议。
首先，你必须牢记的是，你在大学所受的训练是为了将来的职业做准备的。毫无疑问，计算机科学将比历史提供更广泛的工作机会。我们都处在高科技的时代，在不久的将来，每个人为了谋生还需要具备计算机技能。
当然，我仅以你在业余时间继续读历史。
您真诚的，
李明
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