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考研英语(一)冲刺作文背诵资料
高分作文必背范文模板
编著：王桂星
三、高分漫画作文因素
1. 词汇灵活性
1) 漫画：picture; drawing; cartoon
2) 描绘：describe; depict; portray
3) 传达、阐释：convey; illustrate; reflect
3) 发人深思的：thought-provoking; thought-stimulating
4) 年轻人：adolescent; teenager; youngster
5) 缺乏：lack sth.; lack in sth.; be lacking in sth.
6) 无视：be indifferent to; be ignorant of; turn a blind eye to
7) 社会公德：social/public morals; social/public morality; public virtues
8) 认为：believe; argue; maintain; hold; contend; assert; assume
9) 导致：cause; give rise to; contribute to; lead to; result in
10) 乐观：optimism; being optimistic; optimistic attitude; face sth. optimistically
11) 上升：increase; rise; be on the increase; be on the rise
12) 下降：decrease; decline; be on the decrease; be on the decline
2. 句式多样化
1) 漫画所传达的意义是发人深思的。
The meaning (conveyed in the drawing) is thought-provoking.
The meaning (which/that is conveyed in the drawing) is though-provoking.
(What is conveyed in the cartoon) is thought-stimulating.
2) 以上漫画描绘了这样一个场景：几个年轻人正在一条河里划船。
The picture above depicts that several youngsters are boating in a river.
The picture above describes a situation/scene in which several youngsters are boating in a river.
As is depicted/described in the drawing, several youngsters are boating in a river.
3) 导致这一现象的原因如下。
The contributing reasons can be listed as follows.
There are several reasons contributing to/giving rise to this phenomenon.
The following reasons may be responsible for this phenomenon.
3. 内容逻辑性、衔接性(论点+论据)
E.g.: The following reasons may be responsible for this phenomenon/problem. Firstly, …… Secondly, …… Finally, ……
E.g.: It is high time that drastic measures (should) be taken to tackle this problem. On the one hand,…… On the other hand, ……
4. 语篇结构完整性(三段式)
第一段：描述段(描述漫画)
第二段：阐释段(提出问题+分析问题;提出主旨+论证主旨)
第三段：结论段(解决措施)
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发表于 2016-8-9 08:19:23