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如果你的作文流畅程度可以与下文类似，那么在书法可以识别的情况下，你的大作文应该在考试时可以得到14到17分。
这篇作文的特点：通篇所用词汇皆为四级大纲内词汇。所用到的高级语法限于从句，动词非谓语形式(很少)。整篇文章大概300词。
As can be seen from this picture, sitting in the room is a person who uses his computer to work. Meanwhile, there are a lot of people in other rooms playing computers.All these rooms and computers are connected together, which builds up a huge net.And we may find a chinese sentence at the foot of this drawing,which means "the far and near aspects of Internet". What an interesting picture it is!(74词)
However you may react at the sight of this drawing, it will inluence us in different ways.First, it has become a widespread trend that more and more students,even the ones in elmentary school,begin to use internet in their studies;then, we have to admit that the past ten years has seen a continuous tendency that computers and internet has entered millions of families and people use them for various reasons---watching movies or playing online games;What is more, internet also finds multiple applications in business,especially for the ones with international parteners.Thus, I think internet is such an important issue that deserves our careful comment.(110词)
As is true of the famous saying"every coin has two sides",nothing has received more abuse and praise than internet these days.On the one hand, some people go into raptures at the mere mention of it for the use of internet,they claim,has shortened the distance between people and firms,which will provide great convenience and efficiency for our life;On the other hand,some people raise their eyesbrows when talking about internet in that using internet too much will weaken the relations and love among friends and families,which will be a pity.In my opinion, internet is just a kind of tool,only if we may control its negative effect into a reasonable extent,a happier age and society with internet will be within our reach.(131词) |
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发表于 2016-8-9 08:16:05