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社会负面文章的二三段
第二段：原因解释，现象分析
Ø 文章第3句：寓意说明句
Simple and common as the drawing may seem, it informs us of the phenomenon that...
Ø 文章第4句：引发问题解释
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows:
Ø 文章第5句：问题或现象产生的原因(素材或临场发挥)
5.1 政府政策 relevant laws and regulations might not have been strictly enforced to warn people not to do sth.
5.2 个人意识 the absence of the consciousness of …also reinforced this trend，继续补充…
5.3 一边倒 sb. Put sth. In the first place while overlook the importance of sth. 继续补充…
5.4 经济角度 sb. be eager to rake in excessive profits at the expense of sth.
Ø 文章第六句：可以继续写原因，也可以实证分析，也可以写弊端分析
The phenomenon/problem mentioned above will give birth to severe consequences if we leave the situation as it is.
第三段： 措施建议，个人评论段
Ø 文章第7句话：号召句
Confronted with such a thorny issue, people have come up with a variety of constructive countermeasures. Personally, the following are worth recommendation:
Ø 文章第8句话：具体措施或建议
8.1The public / we ourselves should enhance the consciousness of …
8.2 A large-scale education campaign should be launched to…
8.3 The authorities should work out and implement relevant laws and regulations to…
8.4 The relevant administration departments should strengthen the supervision on…
Ø 文章第9句话： 美好愿景
9.1Only in this way can we ensure/ enjoy / make…
9.2 I am deeply convinced that … |
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发表于 2016-7-11 08:45:37