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考研英语待批改作文:

Dear Bob,
I am every much looking forward to see you.But recently I would have to take an important conference and I am very busy for ready for an exam these days.I regret to inform you that I am unable to meet you.
Please accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Affectionately,

Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob,
I am every(应该是very) much looking forward to see(前面的to是介词) you. But recently I would have to take an important conference and I am very busy for ready(改成in preparing) for an exam these days. I regret to inform you that I am unable to meet you.
Please accept my apologies and understand my situation.
(加Yours)Affectionately,
Li Ming点评:字数不够,不太符合考研小作文的要求,建议认真分析一下范文,看一下结构和思路。
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