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Dear Bob,
   I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to buy the book which you want.
   The reason is that I am very busy these days for my teacher ask me to do much work, so I have no time to go to bookstore. I am sorry that I can’t finish it in time, but I will go to bookstore next Saturday and then buy the book for you.
   Please accept my sincere apology. I wouldn’t let you down next time.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
    考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Bob, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to buy the book which you want. The reason is that I am very busy these days for my teacher ask(用过去时或是第三人称单数)me to do much work, so I have no time to go to bookstore. I am sorry that I can’t finish it in time, but I will go to bookstore next Saturday and then buy the book for you. Please accept my sincere apology. I wouldn’t let you down next time.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评:7分写的还不错,但是字数不够
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