考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(209)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to America to go to work , I want to know some of the regulation of that countryas to get the passport easily . Firstly , could you tell me how much should I pay for the passport .Secondly, please recommend me a book that could tell me the skill of how to get a passport .Thirdly ,I was very thankful if you could give me some details of the regulation about America. I will show my greatest appreciation for your time and consideration .I look forward to your reply and to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to America to go to work , I want to know some of the regulation of that countryas to get the passport easily . Firstly , could you tell me how much should I pay for the passport .Secondly, please recommend me a book that could tell me the skill（最好用复数） of how to get a passport .Thirdly ,I was very thankful if you could give me some details of the regulation about America. I will show my greatest appreciation for your time and consideration .I look forward to your reply and to（去掉） hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 点评：7-8分写的不错，条理很清晰。其实最后一句话的look forward to your reply和look forward to hearing from you soon是一个意思，用一个就可以了。
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