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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改(191)

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考研英语待批改作文:

Dear Sir or Madam,
      Due to success in the NETEM next January, high quality preparation materials are of great significance to me. I wonder if you would be kind enough to provide me with essential books in your bookstore.
   Firstly, could you give me a list of the books that you recommend? Secondly, how do I pay for the books? Lastly, what is the manner you send the books to me and how fast can they be delivered after you receive my subscription?
   I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours truly,  
      Li Ming
   
   考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  Due to success(还没有考试,不能说由于在…的成功) in the NETEM next January, high quality preparation materials are of great significance to me. I wonder if you would be kind enough to provide me withessential books in your bookstore. Firstly, could you give me a list of the books that you recommend? Secondly, how do I pay for the books? Lastly, what is the manner you send the books to me and how fast can they be delivered after you receive my subscription? I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for(最好加个your) time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,      Li Ming(落款位于右下角)点评:6分一二段的内容用了很多模板内容。
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