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Dear Sir or Madam,
     As I am planning to take part in the Postgraduate Education Exam, I would like to ask some questions about it considering you are expert in this field.
     Firstly, I wonder the exactly place where I will take part in the exam. Since I am studying in SH and I want to continue my education in NJ, I am a little puzzled where I should take the exam. Secondly, please let me know when I can know the time to know the grades and the basic line.
     I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Look forward for your reply.
                                                                   Yours sincerely,
                                                                         Li Ming
   
   考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, As I am planning to take part in the Postgraduate Education Exam, I would like to ask some questions about it considering you are(加不定冠词an) expert in this field. Firstly, I wonder the exactly place where I will take part in the exam. Since I am studying in SH and I want to continue my education in NJ, I am a little puzzled where I should take the exam. Secondly, please let me know when I can know the time to know the grades and the basic line. I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for time and consideration. Look(looking) forward for(用介词to) your reply.                                                                   Yours sincerely,                                                                         Li Ming(落款位于右下角)点评:7-8分注意细节处和格式的问题,写的还是不错的。加油。
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