考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(101)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam, In reply to your advertisement in the poster on our campus, I beg to apply for the post of physician of your clinic.To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate from Guangzhou University of Chinese Medicine majoring in traditional Chinese medical science and expect graduation this June. Not only have I excellent academic performance in all course, I also possess rich experience of an intern. My well communication skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post. Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Yours sincerely,Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, In reply to your advertisement in the poster on our campus, I beg to（beg是恳求的意思，最好不要出现感情这样强烈的词语） apply for the post of physician of your clinic.To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate from Guangzhou University of Chinese Medicine majoring in traditional Chinese medical science and expect graduation（用to graduate比较好）this June. Not only have I excellent academic performance in all course, I also possess rich experience of an intern. My well communication skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post. Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7-8分写的很好。格式正确，语言简练，表达清楚完整。
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