考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(102)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing the letter for apply the position of your company advised in newspape.The post of sell in full of my previous preparation and I will very proud if I working with you and other colleges in such name brand enterprise.AS a senior from the Department of Marking management,I prossess outstanding communication skills which can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.Past year I had been sold almost two hundred mobile phones in holiday,I rekon that it can become a advantage for the fierce competition.
I would apperciate it if you could considerate my cordially application.Thank you for your time.
yours turly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）,I am writing the letter for apply（改成to apply for） the position of your company advised（advertised） in newspape（拼写错误）. The post of sell in full of my previous preparation and I will very proud if I working with you and other colleges in such name brand enterprise.AS（As） a senior from the Department of Marking management, I prossess（拼写错误） outstanding communication skills which can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. Past year I had been sold almost two hundred mobile phones in holiday, I rekon（拼写错误） that it can become a（an） advantage for the fierce competition.
I would apperciate（拼写错误） it if you could considerate my cordially application. Thank you for your time.
yours（Yours） turly（拼写错误）,
Li Ming（落款部分位于右下角）点评：5分应该是三段式，第一段你从哪看到了招聘广告及你申请的职位。第二段分条说出你申请此职业的优势，要简练而有条理。第三段结尾。拼写和格式都要注意，不要在这两方面丢分。
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