考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(107)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the position of teacher you have published in Online Education in last Sunday.
I am major in History Design Of Department and have graduate last year. In addition to my major course, I minor in graphic design. Moreover，I have gained rich work experience in teaching. Besides, I am open-minded person who could quilkly establish a rapport with others. I believe that my knowledge and experience about this position will help me best for this job.
Thank you for consideration my application. I am looking forword to meeting you in the near future.
Yours respectfully,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of（加不定冠词a，最好说明是什么老师）teacher you have published in Online Education in（去掉） last Sunday.I am major in History Design Of（去掉）Department and have graduate（现在完成时，这里用过去分词graduated） last year. In addition to my major course, I minor in graphic design. Moreover，I have gained rich work experience in teaching. Besides, I am（加不定冠词an）open-minded person who could quilkly（拼写错误）establish a rapport with others. I believe that my knowledge and experience about this position will help me best for this job. Thank you for consideration my application. I am looking forword（拼写错误） to meeting you in the near future.Yours respectfully,（位于右下角） Li Ming 点评：6-7分写的还算可以，拼写错误有点多。注意细节。
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