考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(117)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a sales-assistant position in your company according to the ads on newspaper.
I am an under graduating student from Shandong University. My major is Economics. I have done a lot to prepare for this kind of jobs during my school time.And Iworked as a sales-assistant in my part-time during everyvacation. What is more, my excellent behavior awarded myself an advanced individual prize in Summer-holiday Social Activities of Shandong University.
I am looking for your reply, and a face-to-face talk is expected. Please get contact with me according to the information in the attachment of this mail.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to apply for a sales-assistant（sales assistant）position in your company according to the ads on newspaper.
I am an under graduating（undergraduate）student from Shandong University. My major is Economics. I have done a lot to prepare for this kind of jobs during my school time. And Iworked as a sales-assistant（sales assistant） in my part-time（part time） during everyvacation. What is more, my excellent behavior awarded myself an advanced individual prize in Summer-holiday（Summer Holiday） Social Activities of Shandong University.
I am looking for your reply, and a face-to-face talk is expected. Please get contact with me according to the information in the attachment of this mail.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，注意一些词语的使用，如果不是太熟悉或不太确定的地方，可以先查一下。 这样记得更牢。
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