非英语专业学生英语写作中典型病句实例（四）
多个修饰语错置造成语意混乱。这种错误常发生在有两个以上修饰语的句子中。如:In the 21stcentury, several new energy sources will substitute the traditional energy, for instance, solar energy, waterpower and nuclear energy.
此句修饰语位置混乱, solar energy, waterpower and energy属于new energy sources而不是traditional energy,应该调整位置,明确句意,改为:
Several new energy sources, for instance, solar energy, waterpower and nuclear energy, will substitute the traditional energy in the 21stcentury.
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