考研英语小作文批改：感谢信8-10分例文2

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考研英语待批改作文：
8-10分
    第二篇
    Dear Eleven，
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.
    Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Eleven，
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my （加上study of）Olympic Game in Maths（奥数是Mathematic Olympiad ）. I fear that I would have been give（改为giving） it up early.
    Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    8分
    同学你好，这篇小作文整体来讲写的不错。建议你如果遇到某些不确定但又不是非常重要的专有名词，可以改为其他有把握的词，例如本篇作文中提到的奥数，完全可以改为其他的比赛。