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Dear Professor Qi,
    I'm a senior student major in international business and minor in Italian language in your department.Since I have chosen Italian language as my second foreign language,there have several problems haunt in my mind.
    First is I can't use Italian grammar in a right way.The Italian grammar is more difficult than English,and I often write and speak with a lot of faults.Secondly,a lot of classmates thought I speak Italian just like English accent,which let me feel depressed.I have continuous chosen Italian language election course of yours this semester,could you give me some useful advice and instructions?
    Looking forward to your recent reply and I will be appreciated to obey your best suggestions.
    Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Professor Qi,I'm a senior student major（用非谓语动词形式majoring） in international business and minor in（去掉） Italian language in your department. Since I have chosen Italian language as my second foreign language, there have several problems haunt in my mind.First is（加that）I can't use Italian grammar in a right way. The Italian grammar is more difficult than English, and I often write and speak with a lot of faults. Secondly, a lot of classmates thought I speak Italian just like English accent, which let me feel depressed. I have continuous chosen Italian language election course of yours this semester, could you give me some useful advice and instructions?Looking forward to your recent reply and I will be appreciated to obey your best suggestions.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7-8分写的不错，条理很清楚，同时自己再反复看一下范文。