考研英语小作文道歉信（8-10分）范文赏析二

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Dear Prof.Wong,
　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.
　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　LiMing
　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：
　　Dear Prof.Wong,
　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.
　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　LiMing
　　8分
　　同学你好，作文写的很好，但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事，因此要用过去时。