考研英语小作文道歉信（8-10分）范文赏析一

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　　考研英语待批改作文：
　　第一篇
　　Dear David,
　　I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
　　The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.
　　Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Ming
　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：
　　Dear David,
　　I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
　　The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could(删除) send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check(用词不当) the record and send my feedback to you.
　　Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li Ming
　　8分
　　同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的"主将从现"。