2014考研英语小作文范文赏析：道歉信

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        第一篇
    Dear David,
    I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
    The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.
    Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear David,
    I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.
    The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could(删除) send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check(用词不当) the record and send my feedback to you.
    Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    8分
    同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的"主将从现"。
    Dear Prof.Wong,
    I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.
    To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
    I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    LiMing
    考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Prof.Wong,
    I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(删除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (删除)prevented me from any activity.
    To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.
    I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.
    Sincerely yours,
    LiMing
    8分
    同学你好，作文写的很好，但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事，因此要用过去时。