考研英语小作文批改：邀请信5-7分例文2

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英语复习资料：作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理。
考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
    第二篇
　　Dear Miss Yuan,
    There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
    The occasion will start at 6 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o'clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What's more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
    I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
    Dear Miss Yuan,
    There will be a celebrity（改为celebration） party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
    The occasion will start at 6 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious(拼写错误，改为series) of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o'clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What's more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
    I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the(删除) next Wednesday.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    7分
    同学你好，写作文的时候再细心一些，注意单词的拼写。背单词时要把词义背牢。